Story Grid Guild · Summer Enrollment

Finally write a novel that works —
guided by the editor who's spent 35 years cracking the code.

The Story Grid Guild is a full year inside the 20 Core Scenes every story must have — seeing how they show up in the greatest stories ever told, then practicing until you can write and edit them yourself.

🗺️ The complete 20 Core Scenes map 📚 Masterworks broken down scene by scene ✍️ Weekly hands-on practice
Enrollment for the summer cohort is now closed.

Enrollment for the summer cohort is now closed · cohort starts July 1

Pay in full and get our $10,000 novel-planning system, free.

A quick note from me, Tim —

You already know Story Grid. So I'll keep this simple: we open the Guild to new members once a year. The last time was July 1st of last year. After this week, we close the doors again.

Here's why it works this way. The whole cohort starts together on July 1st and moves through the 20 Core Scenes as a group — learning, writing, and editing in sync. That only happens if everyone begins on the same day.

So if you've been circling Story Grid waiting for the right moment, this is it. The next chance won't come around for another year. Come spend this summer actually learning to write scenes that work. I'd love to have you inside.

— Tim GrahlCEO, Story Grid
Your Teacher

Shawn Coyne knows more about story structure than anyone alive.

Thirty-five years in publishing. A New York Times bestselling author. A career spent as an editor, agent, and publisher obsessing over the one thing the industry still can't reliably crack: what actually makes a story work.

Here's how rare that knowledge is. Across traditional publishing, only about 35% of books ever turn a profit. Now look across the books Shawn has written, edited, or published over his career — and that number is 86%.

That's not luck. It's a system he's spent decades building. And for the first time, he's teaching all of it — scene by scene — inside the Guild.

35
Years in publishing
86%
Of Shawn's books turn a profit (industry average: ~35%)
NYT
Bestselling author, editor & publisher
Sound Familiar?

You've done the work. So why does writing still feel like guesswork?

You've read the craft books and taken the courses. But the same problems keep showing up on the page — and no amount of "show, don't tell" makes them go away.

🔄 Your scenes have no direction

It starts strong — then drifts somewhere in the middle. You keep going, hoping to write your way out, and it just peters out.

If a reader can't tell what's happening, they stop reading.

😱 Your scenes fall flat

The writing comes out like a Wikipedia entry — describing something interesting instead of making the reader feel it. You're not sure which words actually land.

Readers want to feel something, not process information.

🤹 You can't tell what to cut

Thousands of words of world and backstory, and the story still hasn't started. You know you need to cut — you just don't know what, or why.

Revising blind changes things without improving them.

😢 …or it's just a blank page

You'd love to have those problems — that would mean you were writing. Instead you stare at the cursor, unsure where to start.

If you never write it, you never have to face whether it works.

None of this means you're not a real writer. It means no one ever handed you the map for how stories actually work — or a place to practice building them on purpose.

What The Guild Is

A complete, step-by-step map of the 20 scenes every story has to have.

Every great story — across every genre — is built on the same 20 Core Scenes, moving through four acts. In the Guild you'll see exactly how they show up, over and over, in the greatest stories ever told. Then you'll learn to write and edit them yourself. This is 35 years of hard-won insight, in one place.

Beginning Hook Middle Build Middle Break Ending Payoff
Act 1
Beginning Hook
  1. 1Security BreachInciting Incident
  2. 2Getting the MessageTurning Point
  3. 3Close CallCrisis
  4. 4EnlistmentClimax
  5. 5Leaving HomeResolution
Act 2
Middle Build
  1. 6Unexpected OutcomeInciting Incident
  2. 7Grappling with TrustTurning Point
  3. 8Crossroads ChallengeCrisis
  4. 9EpiphanyClimax
  5. 10No Turning BackResolution
Act 3
Middle Break
  1. 11Radical DemandInciting Incident
  2. 12Gut CheckTurning Point
  3. 13The AbyssCrisis
  4. 14DefectionClimax
  5. 15Coming BackResolution
Act 4
Ending Payoff
  1. 16ShowdownInciting Incident
  2. 17Giving the MessageTurning Point
  3. 18The PinnacleCrisis
  4. 19RevelationClimax
  5. 20A New HomeResolution

The complete map you'll master over your year in the Guild — one scene at a time.

Here's how each two-week cycle works

Week 1 · Study & Attempt

Go deep on the scene — then try it yourself

You get an in-depth Story Grid analysis of that week's core scene, plus a complete walkthrough of how to write that scene yourself and how to edit it. Then you take on an editing project of your own: analyzing two scenes using what you just learned.

  • In-depth analysis of the week's core scene
  • Step-by-step walkthrough: how to write it and edit it
  • Your editing project — analyze two scenes yourself
Week 2 · Answers & Review

See exactly how it's done — and check your work

You get the answers to the editing questions and the full analysis of those two scenes, and we walk through the entire process together. You see precisely where you nailed it and where you missed — which is exactly how the skill actually sticks.

  • The answer key to your editing questions
  • The complete analysis of both scenes
  • A guided walkthrough so you internalize the process
This Isn't A Course You Watch

It's a craft you practice — every single week.

You don't just absorb ideas about story. You practice analyzing scenes, writing your own, and figuring out how to edit them — building real, repeatable skill. And you walk away with the exact tools the pros use.

🗺️

The 20 Core Scenes Map

The complete blueprint of every scene your story must have, across all four acts. Your master reference for the rest of your writing life.

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The 10-Question Protocol

A repeatable system for analyzing any scene — yours or anyone else's — so you can pinpoint exactly what's working, what isn't, and how to fix it.

📚

Masterwork Breakdowns

Learn to break down the greatest stories ever told the way an editor does — so you can pull craft lessons straight from the books and films you love.

The masterworks you'll break down this year

The Great Gatsby Literary · Film
Bridget Jones's Diary Romance / Comedy
To Kill a Mockingbird Literary Classic
The Trauma Machine Brent G. Spalding · Contemporary

Different genres, the same 20 scenes. Once you see the pattern repeat across all of them, you can build it into your own story — whatever you write.

Take A Look Inside

A real platform, a real community — not a folder of PDFs.

Every lesson, every scene breakdown, and a roomful of serious writers, all in one place you'll actually want to log into.

Inside the 20 Core Scenes course
Inside the 20 Core Scenes course — video lessons, writing assignments, and cheat sheets for every scene.
The Story Grid member community
The private community — courses, craft conversations, accountability, and a masterwork library.
Bridget Jones's Diary scene breakdown
Real masterwork breakdowns — like the Unexpected Outcome scene in Bridget Jones's Diary.
To Kill a Mockingbird scene breakdown
Scene by scene across genres — the No Turning Back scene in To Kill a Mockingbird.
By This Time Next Year

You'll sit down to write with confidence instead of dread.

Not because you got lucky — because you finally understand what you're doing and have the reps to prove it.

  • Structure a scene so it earns its place in your story
  • Open with purpose, hold tension, and end with momentum
  • Write characters who want something and act like it
  • Show your world without burying readers in description
  • Hold a consistent, confident voice from page one
  • Revise with precision — fix what's broken, leave what works

You stop being a writer who hopes the story works — and become one who knows how to make it work.

Everything You Get

A complete year of training, practice, and support.

🗓️ Weekly Training

🔍

Story Grid Scene Analysis

An in-depth breakdown of each core scene and how it shows up in the masterworks — plus a full walkthrough of how to write and edit it yourself.

✍️

Hands-On Editing Projects

Each cycle you analyze two scenes on your own, then get the complete answer key and analysis so you can check your work and improve fast.

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The Map & The Protocol

The complete 20 Core Scenes map and the 10-Question Protocol for analyzing any scene — the reference tools you'll use for the rest of your writing life.

👨‍🏫 Monthly Live Calls

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Live Workshopping

Watch the Story Grid team work through real scenes in real time — spotting what's working, what isn't, and exactly how to fix it.

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Instructor Q&A

Bring your questions to the Story Grid team. Can't make it live? Submit ahead and watch the replay — every call is recorded.

👀 Ongoing Support

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Story Grid AI

24/7 help trained on 4M+ words of Story Grid craft — your on-call study partner for analyzing scenes and answering questions.

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Private Community

Serious writers all speaking the same craft language. Accountability and insight — not a vague cheerleading circle.

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Full Year Access

Every lesson, recording, and resource for 12 months. Miss a week? Revisit a lesson? It's all there when you need it.

Meet Your Guides

Learn from the people who built the method.

Shawn Coyne

Shawn Coyne

Founder of Story Grid · 35 years in publishing · NYT bestselling author

Across 35 years as an editor, literary agent, and publisher, Shawn has worked on books in every genre and helped launch New York Times and international bestsellers. Where the industry sees about 35% of books turn a profit, 86% of the books he's written, edited, or published have. He built Story Grid to make what the best editors do teachable — scene by scene — and in the Guild he teaches all of it.

Tim Grahl

Tim Grahl

Bestselling author · CEO of Story Grid

Author of six books and CEO of Story Grid, Tim has personally coached hundreds of writers from stuck-and-guessing to finishing work they're proud of. He runs the Guild and the member experience, making sure every writer who joins has what they need to do the work and see it through.

From Guild Members

Writers who were lost in the wilderness — and finally found the map.

Member result
★★★★★

"I'd started and abandoned the same novel four times in five years. I could never get past the middle. Eight months into the Guild I finished a complete 90,000-word draft — and for the first time I actually know why each scene is there."

Rebecca M
Member result
★★★★★

"I used to spend a whole writing session staring at the page. Now I sit down, know exactly which core scene I'm writing, and draft 1,500 words before lunch."

Daniel K
Member result
★★★★★

"My critique group used to say 'something feels off' and I had no idea how to fix it. Now I can diagnose a sagging scene in ten minutes and tell you exactly what's wrong and why."

Sophia R
Member result
★★★★★

"I finally was able to finish a draft of a novel I was actually proud of!"

Marcus T
★★★★★
"The Guild has completely transformed my writing."

"By exploring story in a more complete way, I can construct a more cohesive narrative — and paired with beat-to-beat instruction, I get the right words on the page. It's a commitment, but well worth it."

Amy K
★★★★★
"Story Grid is the map."

"I spent years in the wilderness of craft books and workshops, always wandering. Story Grid is the star chart, the globe and the atlas. Add a community that speaks the same language and you will not get lost again."

Krista A
★★★★★
"So much more value than I expected."

"I was worried I'd made a mistake — it was a lot of money to me. Now I realize how much is involved and how much I'm getting out of it. It's an intensive course, and I'm so glad I get to be part of it."

Annette R
★★★★★
"This material isn't talked about anywhere else."

"The Guild is the only place to get it. I've been challenged and frustrated — all in a good way. It's wonderful to be in a community where people care so much about learning the material."

Pam G
★★★★★
"This teaching is objective, not subjective."

"I can understand logically where there's a problem and how to fix it. If you're tired of feedback based on 'feelings' and ready to understand the bones of story, the Guild is the right place."

Cathy R
★★★★★
"I tell everyone to join the Guild!"

"It's the most useful writer's resource — specific, actionable tools to diagnose a scene and make it work. What I've learned here can't be found anywhere else."

Kristi SAuthor of Navigating Assisted Living
Let's Talk Value

A full year of real craft training — for less than a single MFA semester's fees.

The usual path

A typical MFA in creative writing runs tens of thousands of dollars a year — and most of that time goes to literary analysis and peer critique, not hands-on craft you can use Monday morning.

The Guild gives you a full year of scene-by-scene instruction from a 35-year publishing veteran, plus the exact tools to diagnose and fix your own pages — for a tiny fraction of one semester's fees.

You're not paying for a credential. You're paying to actually get better at writing.

A typical MFA, per year$25,000+
A single semester of fees$12,000+
The Guild — regular price$1,490
The Guild — summer, paid in full$960
Summer Enrollment

Join now for $960 — and start writing July 1.

We open the Guild to new members once a year. The last time was July 1st of last year.

Enrollment for the summer cohort is now closed, the cohort starts July 1, and we won't open again until next year.

Pay-in-full bonuses

Pay in full and get the $10,000 process Shawn and Tim use to plan a novel

🧭

The Narrative Path Course never released publicly

The complete process Shawn and Tim use to take a book from a raw idea all the way to a finished, writeable novel. It walks through everything that has to come before the 20 Core Scenes: choosing your genre and its conventions, building your structure, developing characters who drive the story, and locking in a premise that holds. By the end you have a fully planned novel you're ready to write. Tim charged $10,000 to walk writers through this one-on-one, and it has never been available publicly until now.

🎟️

Live 20 Core Scenes Workshop with Tim (July 2)

Tim walks through all 20 core scenes live, start to finish, so you begin the year seeing the whole map at once.

🗺️

The Complete 20 Core Scenes Map Worksheet

You leave the workshop with the entire map in hand, your reference for every story you write from here on.

All three bonuses are for paid-in-full members only.

Best value · Bonuses included

Pay In Full

Regularly $1,490
$960
Save $530 — summer only
One payment. Full year of access.
  • The complete 12-month Guild training
  • Weekly scene analysis + editing projects
  • The 20 Core Scenes map & 10-Question Protocol
  • Monthly live calls & Q&A (recorded)
  • Story Grid AI + private community
  • Bonus: The Narrative Path, the $10,000 novel-planning process
  • Bonus: Live July 2 workshop with Tim
  • Bonus: The complete map worksheet
Join & Pay In Full — $960

Payment Plan

$1,152 total
$288 × 4
Four monthly payments.
  • The complete 12-month Guild training
  • Weekly scene analysis + editing projects
  • The 20 Core Scenes map & 10-Question Protocol
  • Monthly live calls & Q&A (recorded)
  • Story Grid AI + private community
  • No Narrative Path course
  • No July 2 workshop with Tim
  • No complete map worksheet
Join on the Plan — 4 × $288

Paying in full saves you $192 versus the plan — and it's the only way to get the bonuses.

14-DAY
REFUND

Try it for two weeks, risk-free.

Join, go through the first lessons, and show up. If the Guild isn't right for you, email us within 14 days for a full refund. No hoops, no hard feelings.

Honest Fit Check

Is the Guild right for you?

This is for you if…

  • You want to truly understand how stories work — not collect more vague tips
  • You're ready to study and write consistently for a year
  • You're tired of "show, don't tell" and want specific, objective craft
  • You can put in 3–5 focused hours a week
  • You write fiction or narrative nonfiction and want scenes that land

This is not for you if…

  • You want a quick fix without doing the work
  • You're looking for a cheerleading or pure peer-critique group
  • You can't commit to showing up week to week for the year
  • You'd rather keep guessing than learn a system
Questions

Everything you might be wondering.

How much time does this take each week?

Plan on 3–5 hours a week — watching that cycle's analysis, doing your editing project, and writing your own scene. You can do more if you're on a deadline or less in a busy week; everything is recorded and yours for the full year, so you set the pace.

Is this just theory, or will I actually write?

You'll write and edit every cycle. Each one pairs a deep analysis of a scene with a prompt to write your own version, plus a hands-on editing project. The Guild is built around putting the work on your own pages, not just absorbing ideas.

I'm just getting started. Can I keep up?

Yes. The 20 Core Scenes build in order across the four acts, so beginners get a clear path from the ground up. Everything is recorded and available all year, so you can move at your own pace and revisit anything.

What if I miss the live calls?

No problem. Every live call — including the July 2 workshop — is recorded and posted in your member area, and you can submit questions in advance. Plenty of members are fully remote and catch everything on replay.

I write nonfiction. Will this help?

If you write narrative or story-driven nonfiction — memoir, narrative journalism, story-led business books — absolutely. Scenes, structure, and emotional payoff work the same way, and you'll apply the same tools to your material.

Why does enrollment close — can't I just join later?

The cohort starts together on July 1 and moves through the scenes as a group, so we only open once a year. We last opened July 1 of last year. Enrollment for this cohort is now closed, and the next chance to join won't come for about another year.

What's the difference between paying in full and the plan?

Paying in full is $960 (vs. $1,152 across four payments of $288), so you save $192, and it's the only way to get the bonuses: the Narrative Path course (the $10,000 process Shawn and Tim use to plan a novel, from idea to writeable draft, never released publicly), the live July 2 workshop with Tim, and the complete 20 Core Scenes map worksheet. Same training either way. Paying in full just saves money and adds the bonuses.

What's the refund policy?

You have 14 days. Join, go through the early lessons, and if it isn't right for you, email us within 14 days for a full refund.

This Is Your Window

Stop guessing about story. Learn the map.

You can keep writing the way you always have, hoping it eventually clicks. Or you can spend the next year learning the craft on purpose — all 20 scenes, with the editor who's spent 35 years figuring out what works.

Enrollment for the summer cohort is now closed. The cohort starts July 1, and we won't open again until next year.

Join the Story Grid Guild — $960 →
Pay in full for the bonuses · 14-day refund